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Animator: Brian Kelso-Gillespie

Description: Two characters mourning the death of an important person.

Experience: 8 months

Time taken: 2 1/2 weeks

Comments:

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nicolas bougere:

you must take care of the 180° rule https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/180_degree_rule

Amartya Mukherji:

camera switch was very bad. So so animation

Gabriel:

camera is wrong

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Hannah Wilson:

Pretty good animation. You're camera jumps too far though and it's jarring. The second camera should be on the right side of the first character.

Sergio Barragan L:

needs a lot of improvement...