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Tarzan the Protector

by Joel Cisneros

Final Rating: 4.16. Finished 114 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Joel Cisneros

Description: Tarzan defending his camp... with style!

Experience: In school now

Time taken: about 15 days

Comments:

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Jocelyn Gray:

Great story, the animation doesn't feel like it has enough weight to it, work on timing there

Pauline Champetier:

Hard to concentrate on the animation with the old movie effect which doesn't feel like one and disturbs from the video..

Ryan D Lowe:

The overlapping layer you decided to use here for the render really ruins this piece for me. I can't make out a lot of whats happening, and overall it looks pretty solid. It feels like you're trying to hide things behind your 'old film reel' render layer.