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Deluded Moonlight Murderer

by Patrick Høiseth

Final Rating: 4.09. Finished 120 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Patrick Høiseth

Description: There has been a murder, and the murderer seems to be a little deluded about his actions.

Experience: Recently graduated

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Danny Kneip:

Good overall. I'm not sensing the woman's anger - wish she was looking up at the man on "killed" instead of at the end of "him". It's a missed opportunity to sell the drama, in my opinion. Her holding the body is nice, but when she lowers his head and chest, his left arm moves, but his hand does not. Another great opportunity for his hand to have fallen forward, lifeless onto the ground! The man's reaction and sync is nice and I like the framing of the shot as well as the slow zoom which removes her head from the frame. Not providing an answer as to what his words mean is also a brave choice.

Carlo Nicoletta:

It would be nice to have the man framed inside the window to make him a little more clear.

Ryan D Lowe:

Try to hold poses, and don't rely on the computer so much.