Final Rating: 1.70. Finished 201 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Quentin Hill

Description: This is my first animation...like ever. So give it some love and let me know what I should work on. I loved working on this, and I really hope to continuing doing this in the future.

Experience: I took a 4-week 3D animation course with NYFA

Time taken: about an afternoon

Comments:

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Pauline Champetier:

You can choose this type of design and do limited animation, but even in southpark the characters move and act, the animators don't do limited lipsync only.
There's a tangent right on the mouth of the left character, you absolutely have to avoid this. Enven more if you choose to design it this way.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!