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Animator: Donald Marks

Description: A young nurse is surprised to find...

Experience: 3 Years [Industry]

Time taken: ~10 Hours

Comments:

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Ben Crouse:

Vampires!

Amartya Mukherji:

change Malcom's pose when he opens the door. You have to make a pose to show the SHOCK.

Babul Prasad:

too many camera cuts

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!