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She got him on the hot.

by mb

Final Rating: 5.05. Finished 51 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: mb

Description: Killer believes in his innocence. Is he really killed him?

Experience: 6

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Steve Luna:

Nice acting! But think the one shot makes for a boring composition. What I think would really help is some kind of camera change. But I say again good animation.

Danny Kneip:

Extremely cliche gestures and poses, nothing to get too excited about, but his lip sync is pretty good and the slicing of the sausage is very believable. Her wince at the end is nice and plays well against his general, up-beat mood.

Ryan D Lowe:

Knife touch is a great accent. Watch the twinning on the SL character. She is also much slower in terms of spacing. Tighten that up. Looking too floaty.

RAHUL SHARMA:

female seems floaty a bit

Davit Martirosyan:

Really nice work! Top 5