Final Rating: 5.42. Finished 38 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Chris Rainbolt

Description: Goon rig by Sean Burgoon.

Experience: BFA in animation

Time taken: ~20 hours

Comments:

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Elias Figueroa:

not much going on, but its still very solid.
nice and clean
lipsync matches
body motion is believable
Good Job!

Mike W:

His right foot seems to slide across the floor without him lifting it up (around frame 50) and doesn't feel right.

Amartya Mukherji:

animation is not bad but your camera is very poorly placed. look at the empty spaces.

Gabriel:

solid

Ryan D Lowe:

Simple. I feel a breath could be in there for keep alive.

Sarah Johnson:

Nice execution. Dialogue with the actions feels a little on the nose.

Danny Kneip:

The lip sync is really well done, but there's no emotion in this, no melodrama.. ironically, it seems lifeless. The woman ducks her face under the edge of the screen so it's just a foot and her hair with a man standing there, motionless, with his hands locked behind his back. It certainly sets a mood, but not very interesting, in my opinion. Starting at F45, he's looking across the room and never really looks at her, so that adds to the disconnect. But, his lip sync is pretty solid. He appears to take a little sigh or breath before his last line and that is a great, subtle touch.