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Animator: Satheez Kumar D

Description: The father has come to meet the don who killed his son.. The don justifies his act saying that he given him life. Meanwhile the son is trying to convey his father in action that don only killed him

Experience: student

Time taken: 7 days(daily 3 hours)

Comments:

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fabien:

scenario sympa mais anim pas fini

WillSherburne:

Definitely go over the basic animation principles. It looks like you've got some poses here but then Maya is just moving between them.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Sarah Johnson:

Missing a lot of the 12 principles of animation. Focus on arcs, easing, and secondary actions.

Sergio Barragan L:

Good idea, bad animation!