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Animator: Michael Minasyan

Description: He interested in pupa movement & open it with heat of hand, that butterfly can born.

Experience: 8 month

Time taken: 24 hour

Comments:

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Moy Parra:

My main piece of advice for what is worth would be to simplify the shot big time. There are a lot of actions that are trying to be conveyed and there is simply not enough time to sell them properly. Focus on a couple of bests that tell your story and execute those as best as you can :)

Irina Volishina:

Interesting scenario, good style

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!