Danny Kneip:

Nice idea, good set, interesting composition, weak lip sync. Her reaction to the black magic seems slightly delayed - she at least should see that smoke peripherally and respond instantly. Also, her clutched hands throughout is cliche, but the worry she expresses is very readable! If this piece were 4 seconds longer so that smoke could clear and I could see the dog, I would gladly watch - you have my attention, but I think additionally polishing is necessary. I enjoyed this one.

Ryan D Lowe:

Break up the body for overlap.

Sarah Johnson:

Work on your mouth shapes, especially on the guy in front. Make more definitive motions to avoid the actions feeling floaty and weightless.