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Don't believe what you see ;)

by Tehzeeb Singh

Final Rating: 3.53. Finished 155 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Tehzeeb Singh

Description: Characters used: Norman, Norman Geek, Norman Steve

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 18 Hours

Comments:

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Ryan D Lowe:

This feels stiff throughout. The walk looks like it was where a lot of your work went. Focus on the acting for the next shot as a higher priority! Good luck!

Danny Kneip:

The sync is pretty good, and the idea plays well overall. The woman's walk is good, but her moving to the wall in 2 frames eliminates the believability of her performance thus far. At F164, you cut to the wide shot of her and there's a continuity issue with her position (now she's not hugging the wall). Additionally, the camera moves away from her, and I think that was the wrong choice. The killer's sync is good on the first line and obscure on the second. His shrug doesn't seem like the most appropriate gesture, but it's animated well regardless, but you return his arms to the same position they were in prior to the shrug. Some good potential here, but a few too many missteps, in my opinion.