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11SecClub_July_2014_Competition

by mithun

Final Rating: 4.43. Finished 91 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: mithun

Description: My entry for the July_2014 _
11 second Club contest.
please need your comment.

Thank you.

Experience: 1 year and 6 months

Time taken: 30 hours

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Ben Crouse:

Not bad. The pose feels a bit awkward when he puts both his hands on the other guy's shoulders. Other than that I don't see much to pick apart. I think the first guy's thumb pops a bit as he pulls his hands away from his face.

Danny Kneip:

Quite a bit of headroom on each shot. The interaction between the two is nice, though the hands seem to intersect at F38-39. The scientist could have made his gesture a smidge sooner to avoid four hands in the center of the screen - his hands also seem rushed in that moment. The sync needs some polishing. "I gave him" all reads as the same mouth movement, probably because of the mustache and we can't see the top teeth. The doctor's concern seems genuine, but looking at or toward the camera on the last line is maybe not the best choice.