Felipe Castanhari:

To much pop

Try to fix your time and spacing

Amdbcg:

very ... choppy... (actions and the framerate)
(should be the standard 24 fps or 30 fps)
and the guy needs some pants

Matt Hirengen:

a bit jerky

Christopher Salamat:

the animation needs to be smoothed out better. more in-betweens are needed as it is too frame to frame.

Shon Stewart:

Not to bad. it would help this shot if your character shifted his weight (just a little) once or twice. The head moving from pose to pose need more easing in and out. Not more frames. Keep it fast just quick easing in and out. Then throw some follow though in there and this piece will look 100 time better.

Barnabas Boehler:

There seems to be a problem with your video rendering or playblast. I keep getting flickers where it seems out of focus

Erik Griott:

your frame rate seems really low, and i think it's contributing to some of the smoothing issues you are getting. also the camera keeps on going in and out of focus. your hands also stick in some places, and your poses don't feel very motivated.

Martin Silfvast:

good effort

Carol Cheng:

the character is too stiff - you could take a look at how to offset the characters actions and making it more interesting. also the poses and idea could be more engaging.

Matthew:

Watch how much it freezes, even if only one body part.