Igor Medovshikov:

Lip sync could use more work.

Matt Hirengen:

good job, but it needs more overlapping action.

Barnabas Boehler:

Overall, this is pretty good. but I would finesse the hand poses, so the fingers look like they're holding the chopsticks and have individual movement. RIght now the fingers are all pretty much the same.

Also his lower torso feels a bit stiff compared to his upper half

Kensaba:

Good idea, but need to improove the movements. Keep going.

Erik Griott:

i have some problems with his mouth and his secondary actions. his mouth looks like its going wild. i think you tried to hit every sound, where in reality our mouth only shapes the general words and flow from one smoothly to the next. with the hand, i felt some parts needed to be smoothed out a little more. at one point his hand comes to a sudden halt, which is a little disturbing.

Paul Wei:

Starts off stronger, but gets floaty towards the end.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

staging is good but you need to work more on animation

natalie:

cool trick: sushi versus gestures. I liked it.

Ronny:

nice face animation, good touch the plate with sushi and how he plays with it, a little bit more work with the poses

John Seldon:

you need to move the body a bit more i think. i did that with mine and it made a big difference

Ryan Shannon:

good start, needs to be fleshed out and loosened up. lip sync is off. hands are to stiff, especially the screen left one, needs a better pose.

Paul Fuller:

The eyes never move, they just move on the eye because of the head movements.

deepak:

nice setup, expressions and facial too.

E. Cooman:

LS could use a bit more attention. Overall nice work!

Brad Regier:

the first sentence is very very good! The rest needs some more polish...
Good stuff!

Frank G:

Well crafted story/ set up. Nice staging. Clear gift message. Anticipation on "He has a gift" was maybe a bit too strong. Near the top of the field.