my son is a ballet dancer
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luv2animate:
hey gr8 realistic one but might be only to me??the lip sync is missing sometimes...but all over its gr8!!
Darrell:
love the idea. the key poses look great but the seem to choppy from one to the next... if that makes any sense.
Forrest:
a little on the nose, but otherwise fantastic! the lip sync around the second "gift" feels off
manlio vetri:
love how it moves...would have been nice to see a more refined facial and lypsinc
cheers
Matt Hirengen:
great job! wonderful acting!
David Colacioppo:
The gestures work great with the sound clip. Very well done!
Sunny Kharbanda:
Good work on the body and gestures. The face (especially the eyes) look stiff at times. A little more work there would add even more life to this animation. Keep it up!
Daniel Morgan Walsh:
this was wonderful, really really wonderful. I would only say that something looked strange when the word "gift" was said. Great great work.
Alex Crouch:
Great gestures, very believable and sincere performance.
Stephen Baur:
great work! though the hand chop should hit the "acknowledge" word a couple frames later than it currently does.
natalie:
Good. And accurate. Weldone.
David Higgins:
Lip synch is off and the character looks a little too layed back for the dialogue.
Srujith kumar Ogirala:
nice
Timothy Yeo:
so subtle. good work mate!
Martin Silfvast:
Nice acting!
Ronny:
I like your bakground, the expressions would need a little bit of work, nice body language
Carlos Chavez:
good acting...the lip sync needs a little bit of work. watch the sides the mouth because the'y are not moving enough to understand the phonems..
good work anyway
Daniel Erwin:
lip-sync needs work. but the acting and movement in the body looks great.
Kensaba:
Good pantomine, but the lipsinc can be improoved. Keep going.
Carol Cheng:
Timing is a bit off, the second "gift" is too soft.
Barnabas Boehler:
Another really good one.
I think the hand should linger a little more at the pose for "anything" . Also, I think there might be a bit too much motion blur in the rendering..which makes some fast movements a bit too blurry and dreamy.
Noah:
This is really well done. My only big critique is that the lip sync drifts off slightly in a few places (most noticeable on the first "has a gift"). You may also want to try a different mouth shape on the ending of "anything". The -ING hits around frame 90, and you've already closed his lips, so it looks a little bit like "anythimm."
rajeshk:
very compelling animation. nice. very good.
Kevin Gittens:
Great character selection for this scene.
Matthieu Delaere:
Great effort friend! Really nice and smooth body-movements. Very nice.
Only one thing to say. At the end, when he say "mayby to talk about", let him act a little more. So to pay attention to that final an important sentence.
Keep it up!
Leow Chan Ghee:
This is a really great piece. Well done!!
Nomercy:
this looks nice with all the gestures..I have few small things to say about it,over all need polishing,like the right hand initially doing some weird forward move,,you have used lot of shrugs some times it looks natural and repeating one action makes awkward.the eye brows got some unnatural moves like when he is saying may be..it looks weired.and the lip sync need a lot of work,,except few parts over all its not good at all,still it stands out in the competition wish you good luck..
E. Cooman:
Nice acting and LS. Scene is nice to. Good work!
Raasi N:
I really like father's acting,it is very convincing as a dad ...strong poses and excellent timing.
Chintan Shah:
really neat.... nice..clean acting and polish :)
Frank G:
Good, clear gestures. Great effort!
Jafar:
Just wonderful!
barak drori:
need some work on the lipsync
James Fearn-Wannan:
Ooh that's kinda brilliant.
Alex C:
Great job, his mannerisms feel sincere and believable.
Mark Homoky:
Very nicely done!
picasso:
animation is too good...but if u culd have spiced it up with some concept it wuld have been excellent.









Animator: aju
Description: hai guys, My shot is about a father who is desperatly trying to get his son into a ballet school!
Experience: 2 yrs
Time taken: 2 weeks