Superman Son

Final Rating: 4.06. Finished: 67 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: Troy

Description: Dad is proud about son's 'gift'. But son is disgusted with dad's arrogant and can't wait to get rid of him.

Experience: 2-3 years

Time taken: 10-15 hrs total

Comments:

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Matt Hirengen:

good job although the staging is a little confusing.

Forrest:

good animation, the composition and camera could use some work. the father spends a good portion of the piece almost completely obscured, bring him out and more into the picture

Tim Roberts:

I love the finger gestures in the beginning.

John Seldon:

i love the ending, its a shame hes hiding behind that block most of the time.

Gary Whitton:

nice, one thing i would say is the camera angle could be better, feels like hes hiding behind the block for some reason. you could maybe bring it closer so we see more of the character. Also, when he says "then... maybe" the way he moves his head from one side to the other doesnt seem right. Maybe you could stick to the one side and just make it more extreme for the latter part

Kim Allen:

lol, that is a nice take on the voice clip. nice work

Troy:

Freaking Great!

chakravarma:

hahaha nice ending

Martin Silfvast:

nice work!

Rick Benz:

lipsync seemed a little off with eye movement, and what is your scene going for?

E. Cooman:

Great acting of the main character. GJ!!

Antonio Linhares:

I think the father went too quick from humble to agressive when he says "and once you...". It could have been a more progressive change.