Matt Hirengen:

Great poses, but it's a bit too pose-to-pose for me.

Carlos Chavez:

nice timing. just check your arcs because at time some movements look a bit jerky..
good work

Jeremy Schichtel:

like the style of your set

Sergey B.:

too linear i think

Jonathan Grimm:

-Great poses. Some of the best of the entire competition, in fact.
-Too much motion in too few frames. -"Ease in" to poses more.
-Much, much more overlapping action and follow-through in all the motions, especially at the end of fast movements--some recoil, if you will.
-The color and set design match the character well.
-A good start, but it's just not done yet. It would make great reel material when your finished.

Ed:

Thought this was really great with some great poses and timing. It really stands out and made me laugh. The only thing letting it down a bit is how the character sometimes locks completely and could do with some subtle keep alives and overlapping action. Fantastic job though and you have really individual style.

colus havenga:

i like your pose choices but hes personality falls away a bit because of all the freezes he goes into after almost every pose. try to hold it instead.

Shon Stewart:

Nice job! it feels like it's still just blocking. I'd take out about half the poses in there keep the ones that describe the emotion of the character best than work on the transitions between the poses.

Barnabas Boehler:

Not too bad here. It's good to see you holding your poses. That's a good start. but you need to delay some parts and break up the body movement so everything doesn't hit the pose at the same time.

Also, tone down the movement on the Principal's fingers. It's kinda distracting

Daniel Erwin:

it looks like stop-motion/claymation. good performance... nice poses and timing... i dont see enough animation, just poses.. though, a nice choice of poses.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

concept is ok but you need to work on animation

Martin Silfvast:

the movements are a bit abrupt. some ease in and out might help.

Carol Cheng:

Powerful gesture but the acts are not smooth enough.

Paul Fuller:

Near the end the poses don't seem to be blending together, just going from one to the next.

Kevin Gittens:

His hips tweak a little too much, but nice belly jiggle when he stands up.

E. Cooman:

Good acting and LS. Great work!

Stefano:

instead of still poses you should use "moving holds" (poses with minimal movement) to give the impression the character is always alive

Frank G:

Interesting. Some snappy animation into some very appealing poses. The pants pull up and foot tap were great. I must mention that I liked the skewed perspective on the set but stars only go for the acting performance that was almost to quick in parts. I liked it and it scored accordingly.

Not Available:

Great style!