Has a gift.
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Becky Gamin:
Pay close attention to the character's weight and balance. Having a character with a limp you have a great opportunity to play with his balance that you've underutilized here.
Matt Hirengen:
good poses for the most part, but he's off-balance at points.
Amdbcg:
hmmm... is the ailment real?
oh yeah, where are those follow through motions?
arcs seem to be there, but just be sure to continue the action for a wee bit after the character
Matthew:
The ahhh... prop feels weightless. You could also push your overlap, drag, follow-through and anticipation a little bit more.
chakravarma:
why he hold that one????
Martin Silfvast:
good effort, a little bit stiff.
Barnabas Boehler:
Interesting Prop, but I would have him be a little less lively if he needs a cane to support him when he walks. Also, even though he only takes a half-step...it feels like he's not putting his weight on the cane like he should
Matt Kelly:
he doesnt move like an old man with a cane... poor composition.. work on your arcs and show the weight transfer correctly
Carol Cheng:
the animation is quite floaty.
Chad Swanson:
hes got a walker cane as a prop but he doesn't move around like a elderly man at all...
Keep those things in mind. Gotta get insider the characters head. Each little detail gives the character more personality and spunk.
barak drori:
some weught problems there, when he shift his left leg forward his body stays still and after that his leg are preety much planted to the spot









Animator: Sai Yiu
Description: Daddy was upset about people talking his son.
Experience: A few years of 2d and 3d animation.
Time taken: it is about 48 hours totally, not including the idea of acting choice.