Matt Hirengen:

good acting and poses. lipsynch needs a little work.

luv2animate:

gr8 !!!so smooth one!

Carlos Chavez:

awesome work...i don't think the last gesture fits the audio though

Ed. Hull:

Nice, feels a little jerky in parts, but has nice subtle gestures. Lip sync could use some more lovin as well. Overall, good job!

Ed Lucas:

I like the acting though I'm not sure why he's wearing a dress. Nice job though bro

Justin Weg:

Nice job here. I think it could benefit from some more polish. Work on your eases.

colus havenga:

great facial animation..theres a few mouth shapes thats frozen/not on que but very good!

Stewart:

I like the shoulder strap work, and the gesture to what he is wearing. How ever, the gesture towards himself, and the dress, seems really weak. I had to watch it twice before I got it.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

Oh my God that is so good. Great work, seriously great work.

Barnabas Boehler:

Hey another AM student.

You've got a lot of cool stuff going on here. I like the subtle secondary actions..like adjusting his strap and dress. However, I didn't realize that's what he was doing at first. So maybe you could have him slow down around that part and pause with his hand so we can see the dress slip fell off.

Otherwise it looks really good, but I think some of the poses need a bit more ease in and perhaps more overlap. Also the shoulder seems to pop on "anything"

Overall, I think it just needs some more polish and it will be a nice reel piece.

Curtis:

Needs to be a lot looser in the hips. Particularly in the poses you've chosen. Add a little weight to those hips and this peice will be rockin!

Nice work!

Daniel Erwin:

HA!
i like the head shake 192-217 and the interaction with his cloths, it helps sell the punch line and the focus of what he's wearing.... his spine hip movement in space is stiff.

Andre de Villiers:

Great detail! The lips seem to stick on the first "gift", needs an ease there.

Matthew Murray:

nice job, i didn't really get why he grabs his shoulder but overall well done.

natalie:

I like seeing characters who are easy to remember.

Ronny:

good concept but man the render killed you

Martin Silfvast:

good effort!

rajeshk:

very nice.. but Dude why ur Character died from frame 146 to 158 (12 frames, thats half a Second).....................

rest is nice.

Raasi N:

Very nicely done...looks very much convincing
But not sure what gift father is referring to while he says with his hand gesture " he is better at this".....is it the clothes ironing he is referring to or something else...
Suggestion - the shoulder strap geometry is intersecting few places....

Mark Homoky:

This is a really good effort, and a well deserved almost perfect score in my opinion.

Lovely animation of the father's mouth with as near as I can tell perfect lip sync. Very expressive almost Italian mannerisms with attention to detail shining through at every stage.

Well done, and good luck!

Brad Bradbury:

thats disturbing, but funny.

Ashwani:

good

Frank G:

The shoulder wipe gesture lost me. Did the son make the dress? You show some good animation skills, but it wasn't totally clear to me.

Jurriaan Hos:

nice work!

James Fearn-Wannan:

That's good. That's believable.

NY:

What's with the outfit?
It really messes up the great acting.