Better at this
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Amdbcg:
wow, good arcs, good eyes, good anticipation /follow through :)
Carlos Chavez:
the lyp sync is late
Barnabas Boehler:
Really good work here. My only crit would be to work on the lip synch in the middle. It seems like all the mouth shapes are more or less the same.
Also, I think the breath could be pushed a little more. I know you want to keep it subtle...but I feel it should be a little more noticeable.
Bill Zebleckis:
very nice
Matt Hirengen:
Very nice! wonderful acting and timing.
colus havenga:
well done!
Kayum:
I really like the initial pose, and his facial expression as he is holding/breathing in around frame 60. Its not overstated, and is more powerful for it. Good job.
Josh:
The animation is very believable.
Juan Pablo:
nice hands !
Cameron Huber:
Wicked stuff!
I felt that the breath felt a little floaty and could have been exaggerated more. He does a great gesture on "anything..." but then it quickly snaps back so he can adjust himself in the chair. It would have been nice to see him hold that gesture longer, so we could grasp what he's thinking a little clearer. I would also lose the pupil dialations you have around 225. Generally this is feeling nice and strong, well done man!
Guo WenZHeng:
nice work
Curtis:
Really clean crisp animation. Great acting choices. Can't really say I spotted anything. But for nit pickings sake, perhaps just change up the timing a small fraction on some of the poses so they're not hitting at the same time.
Erik Griott:
very nice! the only thing that caught me off guard was this his pupil enlarge when he says "acknowledge". id say the only thing this is missing is story.
Andre de Villiers:
Good acting, good animation! Scoot the lipsync back one frame..
Martin Silfvast:
Good job!
Ed Lucas:
Like it, but I'm not sure if i agree with the dilated pupils at "Once you acknowledge." Good job bro
Brad Regier:
nice poses and timing!
Nathan Buchanan:
This is great! He bounces forward and backward on his chair very well. There's something about how he says "acknowledge" that feels not quite right tho...
Frank G:
Well acted. the hand gestures around 'anything' may have been a bit too fast or ambitious? Excellent weight in the chair bounce at the end. I really appreciated that. Good work.









Animator: Srujith kumar Ogirala
Description: a father is explaining about his son's talent to somebody who's not recognizing him.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 3 days