Matt Hirengen:

good acting, just needs polish and more attention to lipsynch.

luv2animate:

I love ur stylised animation.

Olivier Ladeuix:

there is room for improvement but that was really nice.

Tim Roberts:

The animation of the paper was great.

Barnabas Boehler:

Cool character design! I love the style too.

What program did you use to animate these guys?

He seems to shift back and forth a bit too much and I think you could have more breakdowns between each pose. Also, his hand gets stuck when he says "He has a gift"

Martin Silfvast:

good effort but the movements feels a little bit abrupt sometimes.

Mark Homoky:

I love this style. Simple flat colour schemes are often more effective and I particularly like this one.

Raasi N:

....nice to see 2d animation...suggestion- i think you need to change where father's head leaning downwards when he says -"than i have ever been at anything.."

Frank G:

Unique style that has appeal. Not sure on final facial expression (is the dad trying to get away with something?). the line of action could have been pushed more to add expression and appeal to the acting.

James Fearn-Wannan:

You could maybe use some more movement through the "My son has a gift. He has a gift!" chunk BUT I love your art style here and what you've chosen to do fits in pretty well with your whole aesthetic so my new advice is: don't listen to me.

Thiago Calçado:

GReat!...but the first cut is strange for may eyes!