Too Late

Final Rating: 5.02. Finished: 30 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: Joey Gates

Description: An obsessive father needs therapy.

Software used: "Adobe Flash" to plan and "Anime Studio Pro" for production. What a silly name.

Experience: Enthusiast: forever, Training: 18 months

Time taken: bout 45 hrs

Comments:

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Matt Hirengen:

the posing is a bit screwball and unclear at points, but I like it.

Chetan Jadhav:

good concept

Justin Weg:

Cool style. What was this done in?

Kayum:

Hey man,

Nice staging, I like the idea

alan:

i love your style. the son is great in the beginning. awesome work

Matthew:

I think you pushed your poses, drag and overlap a little too much.

natalie:

I like your style but you already know that. There s something about this dad though... I fear the audio controls him still and not the other way round.

Shon Stewart:

nice that's some pretty cool flash stuff!

Becky Gamin:

Dad's expression at 126 is PRICELESS!! So funny!!!

I'm not sure I like the "talk about" motion at the end with the hand. I think I see what you're going for illustrating the "talk talk talk" but I'm not sure it works.

Erik Griott:

nice! very fun and appealing animation.

Daniel Erwin:

what a fun look... the timing and spacing in the acting is a little mushy.

Barnabas Boehler:

Hey Joey!

Wow, this is great!

The only 2 minor things that I can find.
1. There seems to be a minor hitch in the hands/body on "Maybe".

2. The "talk about" gesture feels a bit too pantomime. Probably just my personal opinion though.

Martin Silfvast:

nice work

Ace:

you have some nice smooth animation! good job :D

Andy Hass:

Nice style, good to see some variety.

Mark Homoky:

I like this style of animation and particularly notice the attention to detail you've given both characters. The boy's initial nervousness is great and I love the father's expressive facial poses.

Well done.

Raasi N:

Cool head spin ....and nicely finished and packaged 2d animation piece....

Brad Regier:

fun design
It's not entirely clear that the head is rotating; it looks like it might be wobbling to and fro...

Frank G:

The head spin/vibrate didn't have a clear reason for happening. Well polished. Nice timing and spacing. Design and feel is 'cartoony', which matched the action well. Stars by the bucketload here.