A gift, indeed

Final Rating: 4.55. Finished: 45 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: James Fearn-Wannan

Description: It's almost black and white! Classy, huh?

Experience: 3 years as a student

Time taken: 12 hours, maybe

Comments:

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luv2animate:

eooo..look at ur son's dirty habit!!ha ha nice one!

Bill Zebleckis:

Haha, nice

Ed Lucas:

The hand movement at "Then I have ever.." seems to fast as well as "My son has.." I don't know if you wanted to do this, but it look as though the arm is is a tad too slow on hitting the accent for "He has a gift." Nice job though bro

Matt Hirengen:

the motions are a little too snappy, and the characters seem rigid.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

Awesome job. I really liked the whole thing. The face I think needs to be more flexible for it to be more natural but the lip sync was great. the concept great, the body movement great.

Erik Griott:

heh, this is pretty funny. good job!

Shon Stewart:

nice I like the Black and white, It makes this Piece stand out from the rest. the interaction between the 2 character is great too!

Make the father's emotion more intense. more feeling. His muscles should be tense. Almost as if he's ready to explode with anger or some Other type of emotion

Daniel Erwin:

another nose picking kid... try to steer away from cliche

Kensaba:

Good movements, but the lipsink and acting can be improoved, imho. Keep going!

Barnabas Boehler:

I like the B&W tone you have here and strong contrast in color between him and his kid. It's a very appealing render.

I think the kid needs a little more flexibility in his spine when his dad is moving him around.

The dad needs a slight bit more ease in as he touches his son on the chest..

Martin Silfvast:

nice work!

Andy Hass:

I likes it, looks like the boy still needs some refinement (no pun intended).

deepak:

hahah funny. but every actions seems to get started before what he really says. try getting the poses after the words. lipsing loos off.

Kevin Gittens:

Lots of mush mouth.

raman:

nice acting skills

E. Cooman:

Love the acting of the "son", LS is great. Nice work

Brad Regier:

fun shot!
try not to have both of them pointing fingers at once?

Chad Swanson:

Good jobs nice fluid movement and good key poses.

Frank G:

Didn't quite capture the tempo shift like some of the others. Good strong poses. Father kept contact with his son throughout the pice, which communicated well.

NY:

Great secondary character.
Really funny!