Table Talk

Final Rating: 4.85. Finished: 37 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: Sal Paradise

Description: Just acted to what I thought it sounded like.

Experience: 7 years

Time taken: A few days.

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Matt Hirengen:

Great acting! the hand motion is a little jerky at some points, but awesome job.

Joey Gates:

I love how he's acting maintaining great eye contact with the person off screen. I can really feel the emotion in this one. I think the lip-sync could a little more work.

Kyle Detwiler:

I like the poses a lot, but I think some stronger mouth movements would've made this.

Carlos Chavez:

looks good to me..
i just feel he gestures too much with his right hand..

Corey McDaniel:

very very good, natural animation. Looks almost as if it were motion captured.

Cristian Polecat:

Something strange is goin' on here dude. The body animation is outstanding, got great archs. But the facial and the hands, seems to be animated by an another animator. The hands got very few keys instead to the body. The mouth moviment is almost invisibible. Probably too much time on the body! Anyway, great work!

Sal Paradise:

Nice work. Maybe you should learn how to manage your time a bit better and not give yourself 10 minutes to render it and post it to the site.

Your color palette makes me want to vomit.

Keep up the good work!

Oh yeah, one more thing. Just because its called 11 second club doesn't mean you have 11 seconds to spend animating the clip.

Again, nice work.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

body movements are great! The lip sync seems good too. I wish there was a little more flexibility in the face though to give it more energy.

Erik Griott:

this seems very ... real? looks like it was rotoscoped or mocapped for some reason. if it's not then i think you followed your reference a little too closely. but still it's nice.

Pritish Dogra:

Good ideas. Just wish you had polished it more and hit the poses at the right accents

Troy:

great poses....with a bit more effort....it be even better!

Daniel Erwin:

its weird... it kinda looks rotoscoped

natalie:

really good.

Noah:

Great body acting, its very true to the audio. The face is very stiff in comparison though. I think some more contrast in brow shapes and more readable mouth shapes would push this one over the top.

Abraham Aguilar:

Facial expressions and lip sync could use some more polishing.

Nice work

Martin Silfvast:

nice work but looks a little bit stiff sometimes.

Mark Homoky:

Very nice and simple set. Nice expressive movements especially in the face.

Andre de Villiers:

Great natural feel, did you use video reference?

Florent Perrin:

Subtle, efficient, clean and clear acting, one of the best entries this month, anyway my best note until there.
Very good...

Damien Pougheon:

I think you stick to much to your video reference, and it lacks some interpretation, but still it's cool stuff.

Nicole Marino:

A good set of poses, feels natural with speech patterns. Only I'd like to see his body react a little more to the pauses, with the sharp inhales.

Brad Regier:

wow nice acting!
gesture off screen left seems a bit cramped for space

Chad Swanson:

Good acting!

Raasi N:

very nice subtle performance...suggestion some places father's left hand is going out of the frame....is it deliberate? not sure....would be neat if the hand is inside the frame.

Ashwani:

very nice

Frank G:

This was a very believable, well timed, spaced, acted piece of animation. The 'maybe' gesture was a subtle highlight (pardon the oxymoron), for me.