Matt Hirengen:

Good Job! clear acting and poses. Good staging too! Maybe dial down the first bit, and let it ramp up though. it seems a bit evenly timed.

Jeff Kim:

The motions seem way too big for subdued audio. However, the motions themselves seem very good.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

This was very very very good. I enjoyed the movements and the timing was on the spot. It was also interesting because of the characters strong movements. However the strong movements, although I really liked them didn't match with the tone of voice. When i watch what's being done I feel like the voice should be more aggressive, almost yelling. So perhaps toning down the actions would have fit better with the tone of the dialogue.

Amdbcg:

wow, that's great! that movement is very dynamic! :D

Ed Lucas:

The actions in the beginning of the dialogue seem too violent , but the animation is well done. Good job bro

Christopher Salamat:

some of the acting choices especially in the intro don't seem to work with the audio. The ending works out pretty well though

Kayum:

Hey man,

nice ideas going on here, maybe tone down the poses a notch, I know how difficult it can be not to "push" them too hard, especially when you hit polish mode. Its quite a subtle piece of audio, so you can let his facial expression do the acting. Good job.

Josh:

His movements are much too fast, but other than that, I really like the poses he strikes.

David Colacioppo:

The animation is very good but it seems a little over the top for the V.O.

Kensaba:

The animation is very well done, but I think his attitude is not matching the tone of voice, not so angry as is the attitude.

Kim Allen:

Nice actions, but I think the actions are louder than the voice clip. Keep up the nice work

David Higgins:

The only bit I didn't like was the number of times he flapped the paper in the other persons face. I think the last one on anything should have been a different pose. It just looked too much.

Paul Wei:

I like the last move of pushing the paper towards the boss. The first snatch seems more emphatic than what the audio implied. Also the lip sync could better match up with the audio.

Florent Perrin:

Cool stuff!
So sad that you illustrate all of the moments of the text, it would have been far better with choices and moments of calm... for example at frame 110 the gesture is a little bit too much. A simple soft bend of the body would perhaps have been enough?

Sergey B.:

Nice work. i like this very much

natalie:

very expressive

mateus pereira:

I like the way he pushes the paper

Yvan Trejbal:

Great Work

Martin Silfvast:

nice paper steal!

Carol Cheng:

Lip sync could be improved.

Ryan Chan:

Great job on the animation! The only thing i'd say is that the gestures could be toned down just a little. Some of the movements seem too extreme for the dialog and could probably read better if it was a little more subtle. Great job though.

Andy Hass:

The first 32 frames - do you see how the voice performance doesn't really fit such a broad move?

Mark Homoky:

Now that's what I call animation! Well done :-)

Great movement right off the bat - no messing round with fancy sets either. A simple setup that works very well in my opinion. Good luck - a well deserved score.

KristiC:

start is a little more violent than dialogue suggests.

Sten Holmberg:

The animation is great, but the huge movements don't work well with the low key dialogue, doesn't feel convincing that he's the one talking at the moment.

Frank G:

Some great poses, big paper swoop, nice variations in timing. Lots of stars.

Paul Fuller:

It feels like some of the motions are a bit too drastic for the tone of the audio. For the "than I've ever been at anything" he shakes the paper violently while the tone at that point is more calm and somber. Nice movement though.

Chad Swanson:

Good work i like the key poses, good choices.

NY:

The body language communicates different things from the words.
Great work though (especially the timing)!!