Matt Hirengen:

good job, but the last few poses are a bit confusing.

Ed Lucas:

I'm not sure as to why he is starring in the men's bathroom. I feel the mouth animation is a bit stagnant here and there. Nice job bro

colus havenga:

i dont understand the idea too clearly..but good animation..the pointing poses in frame 159 feels too pushed maybe a simple hand gesture would have fitted in better with the rest of hes acting.

Candace Giancanelli:

good job

Barnabas Boehler:

Uhhh
I'm not even sure I want to know what his sons' gift is when it involves a bathroom stall.

And why is his father peeking in the door? If this were potty training, that would be one thing...but this seems a little different.

Erik Griott:

heh, i like the fact that he is references his son in the bathroom, that make me laugh. but i don't understand the part at the end when the light comes on. your last pose as well doesn't make a lot of sense. i can't tell what he is thinking, and it seems like he is in mid gesture.

Nate Moody:

Wow... the implications of the scene... I don't know. Otherwise, the expressions of the character are rather well done, and the motions and animation are really well worked, although the hand placement at the end is a little odd for the phrasing. Again though, the subject matter... too distracting for some really good animation. It made me score it lower than what I would have otherwise.

Jonathan Gonçalves:

not really sure what u want to mean but... i like the acting...

luv2animate:

HA ha ha...Nice one..Peeping Tom dad!!!First I was thinking something else about his gift but the sudden flash of light reminds me of Austin Power's Golmember..ha ha...Its funny!!!But sometimes the hand of the character is moving without anticipation like" he has a gift"..U hav shown that in the finger but better if u curve the elbow also..to show dad is pointing...or else it looks stiff...good job!!!

Chad Swanson:

nuclear poop? Maybe i'm missing something...

Anyhow the animation looks good. The final hand gesture I don't think goes along with the action.

asif:

nice animation and lipsync good luck.

Frank G:

Some thought was put into the story gag here. Toilet humour doesn't score high but it's the acting that we're marking. Very strong start. The end gestures and where he was looking were not clear to me. If he was internalising, bringing his hands in toward his body and looking down may have worked better.