11 second july

Final Rating: 5.43. Finished: 17 out of 161 entries.
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Animator: jack preston

Description: Jack Prestons entry has balls...

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: a week

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manlio vetri:

lol awesome one...i like how dad acts and lypsinc!
i guess a better work could have be done on the arms twinning in the middle part of the shot and even on torso in the same part since it seems dad is gonna make two similar moves.

cheers

manlio

Ethan Cooksmith:

you sped up the audio

Igor Medovshikov:

The lip sync at the end is a little slow. Really NICE!

Carlos Chavez:

the guy in the background shouidn't be red..it's a bit distractive

Matt Hirengen:

Great Job!

Amdbcg:

audio is sped up / edited, but other than that , its great -especially that juggling in the background

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

awesome lip sync

Curtis:

haha, clever idea. The camera move seems a little dramatic for what's happening. I think if you just picked good composition you can strengthen your animation that much more since you won't have to constantantly be re-analyzing silhouettes and framming. Great Job!

brecht debaene:

the sound clip sounds sped up :s.

Could be just me though

Alex Crouch:

Great acting from dad, very good staging and clever use of space in the scene.

Erik Griott:

i had to watch it twice because the background characters performance is more attractive than the fathers, so i didn't even pay attention to him once the son is introduced. i'm a little confused at the son; it feels like he's on drugs AND juggling...he doesn't blink, he looks around like a pidgeon...if that's what you were going for it's ok.

mitesh bhanushali:

very good animation. lipsync is bit out of his way but very good try.

Paul Wei:

Nice feel to the characters. Seems like you ran out of time polishing the end and some of the actions hit a bit late compared to the dialogue. Also didn't really get to notice the son til the 4rth viewing but he's well animated.

Ashwani:

nice work man I like it

Nate Moody:

Not bad, the animation is really defined... the lip work works well, except the tongue flick, it just distracts. The background stuff is almost too distracting. The foreground guy needs more interaction. He simply is viewing the guy in front of him, when there is some fantastic juggling going on immediately in front of him. Otherwise, really good. Very ambitious.

Ronny:

DUDE pretty good, love the render, nice touch with the focus on that camera, little details are the ones that made this one one of the best ones, lights are there, poses are great good job

Ian Jacobson:

Is the sound clip too fast? It shouldn't be!

Barnabas Boehler:

Hey, I like the lip-synch on this a lot..I can even see the little details you added like the tongue when he says anything. The only thing I would tell you to work on is the B shapes and other closed mouth constanants that need a little more time to register.

Another thing i would like to point out is the kid is a bit distracting from teh great animation you have on the main character. Maybe show him juggling after or before the character is speaking

Martin Silfvast:

nice work

Frank G:

There's some nice colour appeal in the polish. It was a good idea to blur the son's activity because the movement tends to draw the eye away from the main character acting. Good facial expressions on the lead actor. The final gesture and nodding may have been a bit too strong for the tone of the dialogue (but it was well animated). Nice anticipation on head movements. "Maybe" gesture came close to twinning. This is nice work and rates high.

Florent Perrin:

In the end I think it would have been more efficient to just put the ahnds on the desk and bend the character. The pose with the elbow on the table is quite unnatural.
But really cool acting, and good intentions! :)
polish polish polish!!

E. Cooman:

Nice acting & scene! LS is great. Nice work!

Matthew:

The 250 pose is just wierd. You also need to watch your freezes and br

Chad Swanson:

Great Staging! Looks great!

James Fearn-Wannan:

I really like that.