Sue Houston:

Nice!
I think my biggest critique would be that the face could be pushed more. It's also a little distracting with the head moving back nad forth so much. It's a little unclear where he is focussing.

Becky Gamin:

Doing hand drawn animation, you had a big opportunity to create something more out-of-the-box that you didn't take. Consider stretching the boundaries a bit more with your characters and situations, it will make it more fun for you as well.

Johnathan Scoon:

i really wish this one wasn't so faint... looks like there's some really nice motion going on

Igor Medovshikov:

Too much head movement.

Matt Hirengen:

some model consistency issues here, but a good start.

Corey McDaniel:

very cool, he seems to shake his head too much though

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

Wow another 2d entry that is really good! the only critique I have is that the head moving from side to side is too much. It gets very distracting.

Arda Uysal:

Very nice, I wish you could simplify head rotations a bit.

Chris Niewinski:

Arms move too much and at the same pace.

David Higgins:

I found what looked liek continuous head shakes offputting. Otherwise it looked OK.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

head animation is too much

Erik Griott:

your animation is very busy, particularly in the head. it's distracting and hurting your performance. i can't stop staring at his hair...

Martin Silfvast:

nice! a little bit floaty.

Ronny:

just be careful with your line of action and your poses

Barnabas Boehler:

Nice clean drawings....but the head is moving way too much.

Carol Cheng:

The lip sync is a bit off. The body animation is too floaty.

jonas bech:

he shakes perhaps he's head a little too much

Mark Homoky:

This is superb and must be the start of something good. Nice simple pencil sketches really stand out on this forum and your use of body language, lip sync, facial expression and acting work very wel overall.

Good luck - a well deserved score.

Ryan Chan:

great job with the 2d! Only thing is that it feels really floaty and he moves too much. So pretty much have him holding the key poses longer so it reads better and be more deliberate with your in-betweens.

Matthew:

To much motion. Use fewer key poses.

Joan Delmont:

good try in 2D ! There is some animation and drawing problems, but there is lot of good intentions for me.

Brad Regier:

i like this style; but maybe try limiting his head rotations.

Frank G:

Found it hard to see on my screen, but sensed some excessive movement/ head shaking. A lot of work has gone into this piece. Well done.

barak drori:

the body id great, it just feels as if the head nodds too much