C. J. Cow:

great animation, but maybe alittle overacted

luv2animate:

ohh dad is sooo angryyy!!!!But his sons gift..Oh boy,is ssssomething!!!Gr8 work!!!

Chetan Jadhav:

why did u cover him in the end?
and.......Acting was really cool

Bill Zebleckis:

Good expressions! That kid is pretty good at whatever hes doing...

Leon Gittens:

very good job, the end pose is a bit weird as he covers up the "b" character and also finishes we his back to the audience, then there is also the negative space fun peice

Matt Hirengen:

funny

Kensaba:

I like the story, very funny. But you need to improve the stage at the end.

Matthew:

Everything looks good, except that the face should be hitting accents at the same time as the body. They look like separate parts.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

That was great!!! Funny, and animated very well, like very well. The lip sync, the body movements of the dad was really good. Lip sync perfect actually. Only critique is that the body movements for the second "Gift" and "once you acknowledge that" are just little too aggressive for the tone of the the audio. But still this was a really really good.

Daniel Erwin:

from frame 163 on is some fun appealing stuff.... i think you could get stronger staging... especially in the opening... im not a big fan of the little guy idea, i think he could be doing something more clever... i guess my taste in comedy is in something thats more clever than vulger... though some vulger stuff can be funny...

Erik Griott:

at first it looks like the green guy is very small and on a podium next to the orange guy. then at the end the orange guy completely covers up the green guy.

Andre de Villiers:

Wow, talking to the camera works great, nice facial expressions! Good job on the fingers! Left hand seems to pop going into the "better" pose. The son is quite distracting. "Then, maybe" - give some more variation with those two poses and carefull of twinning. Feels slighty linear at times. Smooth your geometry perhaps.. Keep it up!

Ronny:

very funny dude, with a little bit better rendering (perhaps some bg elements) aside of that its very good

Martin Silfvast:

good effort

Abraham Aguilar:

Great work man!

Barnabas Boehler:

Yeah, kid is a bit distracting here, though the gyration is funny

Mark Homoky:

I hesitate to ask what his son's gift actually is... but this was hilarious.

I've not the time to analyse this too closely but after several run throughs at full speed and frame by frame I can see you've thought this out well. Lots of expressive use of body language and facial movement from both the father and son and a nice simple concept to boot.

Good luck!

Red Shaya:

over acting but very funny

Ryan Shannon:

animation doesn't match the voice, a little too exaggerated. funny though.

Clayton:

the legs on the kid are messed up

Rene:

Great job, but I don't think you should have blocked out the kid at the end. Keep the dad in the foreground and screen right, even when he's up close to the camera.

Florent Perrin:

hahaha so dumb, I loved it! The movement of the son is so silly :)

asif:

good work, nice motion but the kids move is too repetetive you could have tried to add some more steps.

Omri Navot:

that's really cute. His son is so small.

Elliott Gibson II:

LOL!!!!!!!!!thats hilarious!!!!!

Stefano:

funny idea dude!

Chintan Shah:

lol... nice... the kid is quite funny though

Nathan Buchanan:

Great character, good positions and nice extremes. Not sure what the other guys is doing tho... it seems kind of suggestive...

Traci Plagmann:

I think the son's movement is too much and distracts from the father's acting. Overall not bad on the acting on the father. Try to keep away from the twinned gestures at the end.