Candace Giancanelli:

i love the walk towards the chair and the angle of the camera.

Matt Hirengen:

Great timing and acting. Good job!

manlio vetri:

good one!
maybe a bit over-animated and some refinements in timing and posing needed.

colus havenga:

nice poses and great idea! however i only saw that the tied up character was a cop the second time i watched it..maybe make that i little more clear.

Christopher Salamat:

Great idea! It's hard to see the man talking in the beginning (up to frame 270). Try a different camera angle and bring his head up a bit

Paul Fuller:

Looking good, and the camera work in the beginning feels very cinematic. The animation looks pretty good too, but I think that the hand holding the folder makes some strange sweeps that seem unnatural to me. Good work though.

Daniel Morgan Walsh:

the body movements are really really great. The lip sync is not perfect but it's still pretty good. good job.

Shon Stewart:

like the beginning. This piece would be helped a lot if you added another camera angle in there that was closer to the fathers face. Hard to see whats going on in the fathers face from this shot.

David Jonson:

WOW

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

concept is good but animation is little bit of floaty. overall its good.

Erik Griott:

good choice of camera, and i like the father's performance, but i'm a little confused at what the son actually does. is the son the murderer? is the son dead? is the son the investigator? is the son trying to catch his father? it just doesn't explain enough so that we understand the relationship between the father and the son.

Martin Silfvast:

Great set up, camera, very nice. I like it!

Raasi N:

When the father is facing towards the ground his expressions are not readable,you could change the camera angle or father's pose

natalie:

you have a story, you have a style.. you have a cool character.. here comes my vote too! Weldone!

rajeshk:

Cant read the animation or posing.. Need to improve on staging and composition..

Steve:

very nice, though the mood lighting gets in the way on a darker screen, something to keep in mind

Barnabas Boehler:

Not sure if the point backwards is nessecary...especially when his son isn't there. BUT I do like this overall. I think the scenario is well setup and the story is clear.

Steve Schultz:

I like the story telling.

Carol Cheng:

character animation and poses quite interesting, nice smooth actions!

Nate Lane:

I love the camera angle. Very unique, but it works very well. One thing that I think you could maybe do is work on the lip sync. a lot of the time I didn't really see the mouth really moving to the words. So just work on that and it will really help a lot. The poses are great though man. I relaly like them. Maybe a bit more polish, or even variety, but I think it works good as is. Keep it up!

Thiago Calçado:

really good!

asif:

hey thats really good, Liked it - Good luck.

Chad Swanson:

great staging, however the character was looking down most of the time and you lost a lot of opportunity for great acting and expression. Keep up the good work!

Frank G:

Some good film making skills shown in this piece. Quite 'Hitchcockian'. Nice change in pace with the timing as the dialogue changed. I had to add a star to the constellation when I viewed it again.