Matt Hirengen:

needs more overlapping action and varied timing.

Paul Fuller:

I think the piece is missing internal dialogue of any sort. The eyes are constantly focused on the person the guy is talking to, and it doesn't make for a strong emotional connection for the viewer.

David Higgins:

Lip synch needs some work. All the animation work is on one side of the body for the bulk of the animation.

Barnabas Boehler:

Not bad, but the poses seem to hit a wall and need more softening up as the come into each pose.

Also the character feels a bit too slumped over and the table is too high on his chest.

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

composition is ok but you need to work on animation. you have to give more punch on (acknowledge).

natalie:

Huh! It was handy to place him by a desk, wasnt it?

Andre de Villiers:

He seems rather squint, adjust his eyes individually. Needs more expression in the brows. The lipsync for "better at this" gets totally lost. His jaw does something wierd on "maybe"

Henk Kok:

the double gesture before 309 is very distracting. Love the handposes through your animation.

Ashwani:

good

Matt Kelly:

tone down on the amount of gesturing you're doing...

Martin Silfvast:

very nice