luv2animate:

oh rabbit dad getting angry..really good one..but I m concerned about the undulating body with his steps...the body movement is distracting....orelse its good one!!

Barnabas Boehler:

Hey not too bad. The thing I would work on his weight shifts. He seems to be shifting back and forth at random. I would try to use the weight shifts to accent the key words in his dialogue.

Also, when he does the finger into the palm I think you need to work on the spacing so it hits his hand faster and has more impact.

Ed. Hull:

Good effort, I love the character, but feel there are too many hand gestures, especially with the finger pointing. Also needs smoother transitions from pose to pose, seems a bit jerky in places.

Matt Hirengen:

good acting, but the timing is a little even, and the steps need some work

Nick Kondo:

The mouth need to pull the dialogue through a little more strongly, and the timing of his poses hit a little late sometimes.
Nick

Amdbcg:

woah, that weight really shifts around in awkward places!

Daniel Erwin:

cool character... looks like a fairly decent rig.. deforms nicely

Srujith kumar Ogirala:

you need to work on animation

chrisbyk:

I think that your character moves a bit too much.

Ronny:

Man if you model that is great, if you did the rigging is very impressive, but my biggest issue its with the animation, the expressions on the face aren't there, he seems to have the same reaction and you can tell from the audio that the guy is struggling a little bit more, and the background distracted me a lot, probably its just me

Carol Cheng:

The lip sync is good, though the second "gift" is a little slow and powerless. I think he's been using his left index finger too much.

Matt Kelly:

with a character this big... make sure he moves with a purpose and that that weight shift is correct... first half of the anim he just kinda sliiiides to the side

Antonio Linhares:

I think it's not bad, but I think the character does too many actions with the same finger pointing, it calls too much attention from the viewer.

asif:

lipsyn doesn't go with the sound.

Raasi N:

wow! really like the character design...his fleshy chin ..... the muscles moving underneath.....cool very coool