Erik Griott:

i think you need to add more overlap in your animation. it seems that when a character moves everything starts moving at once, and stops moving at once.

David Humphreys:

the wide mouth shape on "Here" after after ethical implications isnt string enough, but the rest is clear and really nicely posed.

Stephen Kelloway:

I don't think the last pose fits the dialogue. Great otherwise.

Rich Lauzon:

good

Taber Dunipace:

The right-hand person's gestures are a bit wild for the subtle dialog he's speaking. The choices are typically very good, but he does maybe one or two too many for my taste. Also his final pose was difficult to read. The left-hand person is generally good thoughout but is missing certain points of response to the right-hand person, such as the "All done line" where his face stays immobile as he sees that the other person has accepted his approach ironically. Overall it's very strong.

Jett Atwood:

Not bad...I think the pose at the end with the "all done" could be a little stronger...the attitude change doesn't register...or feel compatible with the actual reading of the line.

The guy with the knife reads pretty well.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job, I'd say theres a little too much back and forth movement on the main character. The second one looks great though.

Dave H Shovlin:

Great!

Frank Collazo:

nice gesture. eye movement

C. J. Cow:

i like the poses and timing alot

Virgil Mihailescu:

looks cool, until the final 'all done' which doesn't make sense... but I like the animation. it could be more polished, more detailed, but overall it's looking good.

Missy Feaster:

Hahaha, I love the acting here, especially the inverted hands tapping the table on "stop for a moment." Very creative choice.

Salvador García Luque:

well, I think the left character must be serious about it. But is a great animation.

Matt Bjerk:

expressive poses, nice.

Aaron Clement:

Cool. I noticed the eyeline of the purple guy was off when he looked up. Watch the twinning... good end pose.

Chad Hannah:

nice gestures and timing!

Jan Becher:

Good Character Acting!

Christopher Lutz:

First part is quite good, but in last part emotions of the right guy are not very clear.

Piotr Krysik:

Good job on acting and poses ;)

Robert-Jon Eckhardt:

WOW!!
Very strong poses, exactly towards the end. You can really read the expressions of their faces. I especially like how the non-speaking kid has a range of expressions throughout the animation.
All i can say is the voices really don't sound like kids, which keeps the animation from being believable.

Ryan Glovka:

Seems kind of blocky yet, not ultra smooth, but good job!

Bilal Ahmad:

good effort man!

Juliano Bezerra:

Very good man!
I think that the unique correction is when he touch his elbow on the table..its missing gravity in it. sorry poor my english. lol

Alex Zemke:

Some nice poses here! But there seem to be maybe too many accents from stage-right. Try to limit just how many words your characters emphasize, and keep the focus on the meaning and thought process.

Gregory Marlow:

Very good

Jennifer Anaya:

you had some really good poses in there. good job.

Roshan.k:

arcs arcs and moving holds..!that's all i can say..great effort in acting

David Shum:

ahahha thats so cute!
I like it.
hand poses are attractive.

Its weird listening to such a deep mature voice, on a young character. I like it.

I like the hard holds you have on those characters. One can easly make hard holds like that look incomplete. I think you did it fairly nicely here.

I think the hands needs some offset. Both between left hand and right hand, and between upperarm, forearm, and wrist (and fingers).

Good stuff overall. I like the style.

Victor Wong:

Decent movement and acting gestures are in sync. Lip sync is done very well. The snik of the letter opening needs a bit more energy, but otherwise is handled well.

Jônatas Kerr de Oliveira:

nice work... i can’t understand only the final pose... maybe the facial expression don’t helped

Olivier Ladeuix:

good and simple

David J Harmon:

voices don't match the kids, they sound too old

Mike Courtney:

Striped shirt seems to become very still at times. Happy face shirt pops at times. The lip-sync is alright.

Max Herzfeld:

very natural action.

Christiaan Moleman:

I like purple stripes' reaction. Not sure about the "all done" gesture. Otherwise works pretty well.