Santa Claus
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Salvador García Luque:
not a good lipsyncing
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Had a laugh with Santa, although different camera angle or placement of the body would be clearer. I think the animation lacks some strength on some moments on the main character's part. The lipsync needs some work, you can barely tell he's talking.
Christopher Lutz:
Nice idea! Lip sync of the right guy is a bit off.
Bilal Ahmad:
very nice work...
Gregory Marlow:
Is that a dead santa back there? Very nice.
Aaron Clement:
I like the general proximity of the characters. The towering stance of the guy with the scissors was good. Staging could have been better. I only noticed Santa Claws near the end of the clip. The movements felt a little fast at times.
vic:
lip sinc doesnt match.....
Taber Dunipace:
I understand the concept, but I still don't really understand either of these characters, what their motivations are, or how they feel about the situation they're in.
HariNarayan:
character seems 2 b floating a lil bit
Victor Wong:
Volume problems with the package being opened. Lip sync needs a little more work.
Rich Lauzon:
The Mouth need s a bit of work and the body needs to be snappier.... But good setup for the gag!
Winnie . S:
Maybe righty's action on 'ethical implications' can be more extreme?
Olivier Ladeuix:
the character screen right seems a bit floaty after frame 160 and his lip sync doesn't make too much sense throughout, favour the opening and closing of the jaw according to the audio clip instead of this constant offsync opening/closing motion.
Mike Courtney:
The shorter character has his hands intersecting each other. He's also a bit jerky in places. The taller character needs work on his lip-sync. Good interaction.
Max Herzfeld:
The work you did is great but it seemed like you focused your attention on just one of the characters.
It feels incomplete but what you have is really good.
Adriel Restrepo:
haha! Funny concept with the santa in the back. I like the acting you did with the shorter guy.
Christiaan Moleman:
I like the acting choices, the way Bishop backs away and such, but you need some polish on the feeling of weight and keeping the body feeling as one whole.
Animator: David Andrade
Description: A small piece about two guys realizing they've been put on the Naughty list. They put matters into their own hands and figure a way out. Needs work, but it's getting there!
Experience: 1 1/2 weeks
Time taken: Animating for 1 1/2 years, 3 months professionally.