Erik Griott:

i find the ending a little awkward. i think the guy with the scissors would move closer to her instead of stretching from really far away with his legs wide open? and i probably would have shown the bride earlier so that we understand the reaction of the naked guy in the beginning.

Rich Lauzon:

that's even funnier because he's nekkid!

Dan Abbruzzesi:

very funny

Carlos Fins:

Ha, this one is pretty twisted. :D I'm not crazy about the guy with the dark clothing's pose at the end when he clips the tag off, tho. Good work, tho!

Stephen Kelloway:

love the idea!

Dave H Shovlin:

Hilarious! Watch your settles.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Good job on the final surprise! the first character moves pretty good, although I think the "main" phrase lacks some strength.

Taber Dunipace:

That guy is naked. Why? When character 2 says "mail" where's the ironic or incredulous face on the first guy. This is a person they're talking about! His face should tell us that he's shocked, or scandalized, or something! The acting needs much improvement here and more study of animation principals is a must.

Jett Atwood:

This was a lot of fun. He's not overdone and the gag at the end is fun.

Steve Sloan:

haha, funny take on the clip, good animation too.

miles southan:

Good start! The fingers feel very stiff though, especially on "wait" and in the last shot. The stop for a moment gesture around 155 feels stiff too and very twinned. Offset the arms from each other and get some overlap in the hands and fingers.

P Walters:

Great concept!

jeff beck:

love the mail order bride but watch your lip sync

C. J. Cow:

lol this is soo funnny

gerardo:

nice idea

Missy Feaster:

LOL. Clever. This could be push even further with some dramatic facial expressions.

Virgil Mihailescu:

hahahahahaha, excellent idea! I think it could be improved with better framing though, and it needs more work on the lipsync, but I like the body animation and the expressions! and of course, the idea. I love the idea!

Theo Edmands:

The animation looks pretty good. Your acting choices are good. The sense of enviroment is really nice. Why is that guy naked, though?

Chris Smith:

Quite good animation there.
One crit: When the guy says "All done" at the end, his acting is unclear.
Give him a hand gesture or two and some shoulder action to tell us he is "all done", and position the camera for a slightly frontal shot of him, so we can see him.

Chad Hannah:

HAHA, awesome idea! Nice lip sync on the naked guy!

Salvador García Luque:

you must focus in the mouth movement.

Aaron Clement:

Good staging. Maybe if the girl in the dress had been in the first shot also, might have helped with continuity.... Good posing.

Bayu Sulistyo:

opening... what? :)

Christopher Lutz:

Nice animation and idea.

Robert-Jon Eckhardt:

Why does he cut the cord? That's not clear from the animation.
The body animation looks natural and I like the three shots you chose. Lip sync isn't very strong though.

Ryan Glovka:

A little odd, but pretty well done! Entertaining and funny!

Bilal Ahmad:

a good effort

Alex Zemke:

Funny stuff! Nice camera work, great acting choices, very well thought-out. Some areas, like the snatching of the scissors, feel a bit awkward, as does the final pose as he goes to cut the tag (maybe a different camera angle?), but overall very watchable! Nice job!

Alison K. Sanders:

Good stuff, cute idea, solid mechanics

Gabe Dill:

funny idea. love the facial work on "we have to".

Gregory Marlow:

Naked dude is a bit odd. Love the concept. good animation.

David Shum:

Haha.... the technical animation is good...
i'm not sure i got the story tho :/

Victor Wong:

The shift from scene 2 to scene 3 is a but abrupt in viewpoint, so some flak for that decision should be expected. A touch more SI/SO is needed for the grey man, and sync needs a bit more work, but otherwise it's pretty good.

Olivier Ladeuix:

what is the story?

Adriel Restrepo:

Hahaha! This one is problably the funniest entry! Even without the end the expressions on thier faces was very comical. I think you can maybey just push the Alfied's facial expressions a little more. Keep up the great work!

David J Harmon:

hmm don't make sence

Mike Courtney:

The naked man's movements are a bit jerky. The lip-sync is not quite there yet. Props for the humorous ending.

Max Herzfeld:

Great story twist.
However keep the acting clear. The audience should be able to tell what the pink feels about what he's looking at, and that he's actually focused on something.

Good work.