Danny Garnett:

It's almost there! It seems a bit "pose to pose"-y. have the poses flow into eachother, and add some overlap in the actions.

Rich Lauzon:

NOT bad. I would have exaggerated "Ethical" a bit more and Blue guy jst stops completely. It would be a good idea to make him ponder and react to what the ther guy is talking about/ reacting to the bigger movements.

Jett Atwood:

It's good but the second character feels almost a bit TOO snappy...while the first character after he delivers his opening bit of dialogue just freezes. You have to let him react a LITTLE bit or he's just dead.

Erik Griott:

his mouth doesnt move sometimes when he is talking.

shamyl:

muahahahah!(evil laughter!)
this is the one time i wont judge fairly... sorry :-P

P Walters:

blocking's not bad. needs smoothing of the motion. Maybe think about what else the character could be doing with his hands besides the generic hand gesture... tapping the paper, scratching his head, pointing at the other character. I like how simple you kept it.

miles southan:

Your poses are pretty good but you have to think more about getting between the poses. It's very pose to pose to right now. You need to break up the action. Right now everything hits at once. Have one part of the body lead your transitions. Think about spacing more and cushioning your actions.

Santiago Arellano:

Just one facial expression... could be tons better, especially at the end

gerardo:

a little more contrast on poses will be great

Theo Edmands:

The facial expressions are nice, however the body is moving way too stiffly. Generally it could be a lot more fluid.

Missy Feaster:

Nicely done. Be careful to stagger timing on different parts of the body.

Dan Dulberger:

Very jerky animation. Kinda irritating to watch. Lipsynch was mostly ok.

Justin Weg:

Try to keep the other character alive more.

Salvador García Luque:

nice animation for the left character i mean.

Brian Nicolucci:

A good start but seems like there is still much to do.

The lip sync never seems to hit right, feels in many places like his jaw is wired shut.

Christopher Lutz:

Right guy is a bit stuff, left guy is hardly animated.

Aaron Clement:

The guy on the left is too still. Lip sync needs some work... Don't lock things off, it's really bad to do in character animation

Bilal Ahmad:

you could have done a lot better, on the biped character, and also there's a room for improvement on the other character, like on the statement "ethical" and the "someione else's mail", you could have more strong poses...

Juliano Bezerra:

the lip sync isnt good enough try again.. lol

Victor Wong:

Lip and gesture sync definitely needs more work here. You also have a big volume problem; the second character is bigger in the end than when the clip started.

Chris Smith:

Ummm...use some ease in and out. Study those and come back and try again. Lack of this made movements too rigid and strange.

Taber Dunipace:

I... don't really understand what's happening here. The lip sync stops on the character at one point and I don't see the *click* sound being addressed at all.

Scott Farrell:

Cool, for the next competition I'd spend a lot more time on the key poses. Id get more out of seeing great key poses in blocking then seeing something splined but feeling rushed

Olivier Ladeuix:

make the animation of the body a bit more organic. It is a bit robotic here.

Michael Twentyman:

primary actor was very well done, but needs more fluid movement (too many hard stops) and the visemes need reviewing toward the end.

Mike Courtney:

Very stiff overall. It looks like this is a first pass for the animation. The 3D Studio Max rig becomes a statue after his line and the other character needs to ease in and out of his poses.

Christiaan Moleman:

Left guy is frozen through most of this, and whenever you move anything you don't seem to involve the body much. Everything should work together as a whole.