Erik Griott:

there isnt a whole lot of character to these characters. also, they have the same expression the whole time with the exception of moving eyebrows around.

Rich Lauzon:

I like the posing in this one. I also like how there seemed to be more time to get to the poses, snappy when it needed to and good pasing for the rest.

Carlos Fins:

Looking good. I think the posing could be pushed, tho.. not a big fan of the finger wag. But it's got some good fluid motions. Good work!!

P Walters:

Good blocking, feels unfinished

Frank Collazo:

very good idea. email!

Virgil Mihailescu:

the idea is cool, the acting doesn't support it very well though. I like the 100%-gray-guy's hand gesture after 'ethical implications' :D

David Humphreys:

great start but some of the beats seem a little late. good smooth movements otherwise.

Missy Feaster:

Nice. The finger-waggle (coinciding with a head-shake?) on "ethical" is a little strange, too even, maybe.

Salvador García Luque:

I think you need to focus in the animation of the characters a bit more. The lipsync looks good, but the body animation needs work.

Michael Twentyman:

Very little emotion, unnatural, rapid movements to full stops, robots look nothing like Bender.

Aaron Clement:

Good staging... It's all very clear, which is good. A little floaty in places... just needs more breakdowns.

vinay:

good job:)

Taber Dunipace:

The dark shirted guy doesn't act like the type of person to pull a knife up to a person's throat. The acting choices here are confusing and the animation doesn't help to explain the oddities in the performance.

Christopher Lutz:

Scene doesn't read too well. The last part (after he puts the knive to his throat) doesn't look convincing.

Bilal Ahmad:

you could've done a lot better, if you have executed the last minute postures, when the knife opens, overall, very good work...

Matt Garward:

the action feels nice and natural, up until f228 with the knife to the throat, when everything freezes. From there on it feels a bit floaty, and I don't understand why, after pulling the knife, he takes it away again. Watch out for floatiness, in the end section and also around 180-210, where it feels a bit pose-y and computer-inbetweened. a bit more snap, and overlap between movements, would help I think. Nice work!

Gregory Marlow:

Pretty good. He should leave the kife to his throat longer though.

Danny Garnett:

could use some smoothing out from pose to pose, otherwise pretty good!

Chris Smith:

Not a bad effort here - key poses and animation is nice and simple. Not too hard to follow.
I get the feeling it's a little too simple though..? Perhaps add a little more expression between some of the poses and liven it up a little more.

Victor Wong:

Actions are a little too smooth; more SI/SO is needed. Consider the use of moving holds before some of the poses.

Olivier Ladeuix:

a bit floaty. stay in control of your curves. I like your interpretation of the audio clip

Mike Courtney:

The animation isn't long enough for the sound clip. The lip since on the standing character seems incomplete. The sitting character's hand gestures are alright.

Max Herzfeld:

Nice work however the movement seems to go poses by pose.
Fluid but fractured
also the standing figures thought pattern could be made clearer. He especially freezes after each pose.

Good work overall

Christiaan Moleman:

I think it would be better if you did the "all done" line while still in the knife to throat pose to underline the idea of the shot.