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Showdown at the 11Second Grocery

by John M

Final Rating: 3.53. Finished 42 out of 52 entries.

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Animator: John M

Description: The Assistant sees his nemesis family

Experience: a year

Time taken: week

Comments:

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Alex Ang:

I can't tell why things are happening.

Yonghwan Seok:

Hard to understand the story

Richard Adams:

This is visually very appealing, and the motion is beautifully smooth. Problem is...it completely lacks any of the 12 Principles of Animation. Go study that on Youtube and Google. Great character design and excellent drawing skills here though.

Toni Alarco:

I don't understand the story

Adrian Petitjean:

the angle is off and so is tge camera movement. Did not understand what is happening.

Ryan Woods:

bones of an animation are there, can see something good with refining!... terribly confused about plot....

Victor Lemée:

Nice design but the story is not clear. lack some weight and the camera angle are a bit off for me

Jonny:

I found the story very unclear on this one