Final Rating: 3.82. Finished 38 out of 52 entries.

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Animator: Jack Doremus

Description: A man must make a vitally important decision at midnight.

Experience: Beginner/Student

Time taken: 1.5-2 weeks

Comments:

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Melissa:

I dont understand what is the challenge here..

Alex Ang:

Very confusing, in these types of shots we usually see the character hunched down but that would also give it away.

Adrian Petitjean:

Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals

Ryan Woods:

expression during frame 90-130. i dont know what emotion he is feeling here and i think this strongly impacts the whole animation. also the nose is too active to ignore and too subtle to be sniffing. There are other ways to animate inhale/exhale. I would suggest leaving it still as the nose doesnt help us express. (maybe wrinkling the nose for disgust but thats more in the bridge of the nose/eyes) lastly he stands and raises the bottle WAY to fast. fun idea and composition sells the joke well. also good timing on blinks.

Victor Lemée:

Take some reference for the head look and watch your arcs

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Idea is nice and animation is ok, but could use some improvement.