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Destroy magical Stone

by Alongz

Final Rating: 3.17. Finished 50 out of 52 entries.

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Animator: Alongz

Description: Late to the party, but try to manage it. Inspired by zootopia and how to train your dragon. A bunny that tries to destroy a magical stone guarded by an ancient dragon. (a couple of hours of work.... more in a couple of days)

Experience: 10

Time taken: 1 month

Comments:

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Richard Adams:

Judy Hopps running works very well. You conveyed her anxiety very well. Bit of a strange pop though when she reaches the wall. And looks like you ran out of time before you could animate the dragon. One of the better entries this month, though.

Adrian Petitjean:

Floaty animation. Or no animation at all.
Start by going back to the fundementals. Maybe gather some reference to compare it with your animation. I would like to see the dragon moving a bit more.

Ryan Woods:

run looks good, maybe a tad bit of sliding... did she run THROUGH THE WALL! then.... there was staging but no animation, sadface, get er dun!

Victor Lemée:

lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs. Be careful with the "T" pose in the begining

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Very rough animation, and cut off the audio.

Alvindra Surya Wardana:

this is blocking? nice camera angle