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Mother doesn't approve!

by Karl Bernhardt

Final Rating: 6.23. Finished 10 out of 83 entries.

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Animator: Karl Bernhardt

Description: After a hefty night out a young man has began dating a stripper... but his mother doesn't seem so happy about it.

Experience: 3 years as a student

Time taken: 40 - 60 hrs

Comments:

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Howard Cameron:

The Granny needs some more work (she is not hitting her words and not as expressive as the other two). Your final scene with the two characters makes your first shot look rushed.

Franklin:

That last scene should have lasted longer. The girlfriend reaction was very cool.

William Barry Eggington:

Lipsinc on Mum is a bit off but the rest is great!

Marckus Duverger:

This is really good! The big problem I believe I see is that the old lady's mouth is offsetted against the voice clip. The guy is perfectly fine, if you fix that then this is amazing!

It's great as I see it as well, great job!

Sarah Johnson:

Animation of the mother was pretty rough, but the other two characters look solid!

J.K. Riki:

Nice job with the ending in particular! Really nailed that part.

Cristy L. Einung:

The guy looks really good and the setup is great, but I think the mother's lip sync needs work.

Kelsey:

The movement and emotion is so great!!

Richard Adams:

Love your concept! Made me laugh! :)

Annie Iglesias:

I like the acting choices, but I feel like the mother's lip syncing is a little off and the vegetable cutting feels too stiff. That being said, I wouldn't be surprised to find this in the top 11. It's very appealing