Final Rating: 2.57. Finished 76 out of 83 entries.

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Animator: Bibiana

Description: hi

Experience: no

Time taken: 2 hr

Comments:

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Brian Duffy:

not quite ready. look at how the arm is hiding behind the head. there's no clear composition here. the window is distracting. draw more thumbnails of how your shots could be composed to get the most interesting performances out of the characters. lip sync comes very last. work on fundamentals.

Daniel Miller:

Careful not to break the 180 rule, try putting the cam over Mother’s right shoulder instead of her left