Final Rating: 3.12. Finished 65 out of 83 entries.

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Animator: Jorge Palacios

Description: This is a humble animation i made in a couple of hours, I´m just starting so please be nice c:

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 4 hours

Comments:

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Brian Duffy:

there's some interesting choices here on staging and lighting and the clear power dynamic between the characters, but this shot should be all about the mom. you cut too quickly so we miss the best bits of her line and the son isn't doing anything. don't worry about lip sync. see how you can make a scene communicate everything with just body language.

Vijay Bisht:

try some good acting refences use body parts dont make it look stiff