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pear´s disappointment

by ivan

Final Rating: 6.35. Finished 11 out of 93 entries.

1,319 views including the voting period.

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Animator: ivan

Description: pear´s disappointment

Experience: 13

Time taken: 6 days

Comments:

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Zoe Piel:

This is good but it feels kind of "fast." Not sure why.

Ranojoy Datta:

nice expression smooth ...

Maxime Gruet-Masson:

Really cool but i think there is a little offset at "society" and "funny". I like the pear style ^^

Abdurrahman Zhukov:

Really awesome! Nice animation

Scott:

The always moving camera was distracting.

Donald Marks:

Lol weird, but nice animation The brows move almost too much in my opinion, feels a bit forced.

Johann Wong:

Really digging the facial animation! The body animations on the other hand, could be tighter & have more obvious arc.

Chad Cox:

Love the expressiveness of the faces. It seems like the video is mostly 2 or 3 frames behind audio, atleast for the 1st and last lines...

Adam Maier:

Fluid movement, there's a bit too much motion in the mouth at times

Luke Coleman:

Fantastic facial expressions and body movement, the only real negative I coul dnotice was the the lip sync seemed a bit off in places for female...pear? lol. Good job never the less!

Felipe Navarro:

Its a really good animation, both subjects have great movement, the lip movement however might be a little behind...

Jordan Lewers:

The lip sync is just slightly off, and I think the mouth movements could be more subtle since this is a more tender scene.