Final Rating: 4.95. Finished 43 out of 93 entries.

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Animator: Lennard Cheam

Description: An arrogant and oblivious husband learns that his wife has divorced him way ahead.

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 2 weeks (in total)

Comments:

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Zoe Piel:

A little too zippy for the dialogue.

Johann Wong:

Guy animation could be simplified at the beginning. Watch out for them repetitive movements at the beginning too. ( Guy's left arm).

Overall animation could use more arc, tighter timings & cushioning.

Donald Marks:

Decent Start. A bit overacted, and the man's mouth shapes are a bit off putting for me.

Andrew DiLullo:

A lot of sudden and jagged movements. The actions are so extreme for such a mellow delivery of dialogue

Brad Bradbury:

in my opinion,
the actions and movements are too big for the slow pased dialog.

Monica Stringer:

the mix of realism with heavy cartoon elements is really jarring