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This Glass Between Us

by Donald Marks

Final Rating: 6.32. Finished 14 out of 93 entries.

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Animator: Donald Marks

Description: A relationship can only last so long under these circumstances...

Experience: 5 Years

Time taken: 5 or 6 full days

Comments:

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Erin Goddard:

I really like the animation and emotion in the female character. The male seems a little bit less polished in comparison. really nice!

Hajar Khakrand:

I like her hand spinning :)

Johann Wong:

Love the girl's acting choice~ As for the guy, it felt like it needed more shoulder movements, it's a lil stiff for me as it is now.

Jordan Lewers:

Great performances from your characters! You did a great job with this animation. I wonder, are we supposed to assume he's referring to a different ring than the one she's currently wearing? Also, the end is a little abrupt, so I'd suggest buffering the animation by a couple seconds.