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A complicated marriage

by Lisa Cooper

Final Rating: 5.13. Finished 37 out of 93 entries.

438 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Lisa Cooper

Description: A man and his now ex-wife struggle with the reality that they are no longer together.

Experience: Third year animation student, no prior experience before University

Time taken: 2-3 days

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Zoe Piel:

Odd camera choices.

Manuel Jiménez:

Review staging ;)

Johann Wong:

Tighten up the animations. They look really floaty.

Andrew DiLullo:

Due to the constant movement on both characters and the awkward staging, there's currently no way to tell where I'm supposed to focus.

A F:

Getting a nice '50s film-noir vibe from this. The lip-syncing and action (especially on the "they tell me" part) should match more, at the moment it looks a bit disjointed. Great work, though!

Kristyna K. Hrdlickova:

OMG!! So Nice, I love the acting, how he realized that she is gonna say something that will hurt him a lot and already feels hurt.