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I paid my debt to society!

by Nico Ahun

Final Rating: 4.64. Finished 54 out of 93 entries.

437 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Nico Ahun

Description: A man is going to talk to his ex-wife, and she stays at the door without letting it pass.
He tries to fix the relationship, but she is still very angry, for everything that happened.

Experience: 1 year studying in an Online School, Animation Gym.

Time taken: I was about 2 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Erin Goddard:

A really good start, be careful not to enounciate every singe syllable in the dialogue; it creates the impression that the mouths are moving unnaturally fast.

Johann Wong:

Poses are there..tighten up the animation, they look really floaty. :)

Luke Coleman:

Very Good, love the weighting and camera shots. Only two things I can see wrong with it; the man seems to be slightly cross-eyed and the females unfolding arms are a little to quick. But still, good work!

Vin Liew:

animation is stiff, lack of some principles.