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Darn it Stephen, it's a swan!!

by Steven Clibborn-Dyer

Final Rating: 5.84. Finished 21 out of 142 entries.

835 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Steven Clibborn-Dyer

Description: A sniper veteran and his rookie spotter are out in the field...but what did they find?

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 weeks part-time

Comments:

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Nassim Briedj:

LOL good one

Michael Launder:

made me laugh! funny idea! the timings of some mouth movements are a little abrupt, you didnt have a ton of body motion so some more attention to mouth timings and shapes could benefit a lot!

Michael Kristiansen:

Cool concept and nice execution. Some polish and the animation will be great. When the guy with the binoculars starts to talk it does'nt really fit in my opinion, but other than that well done.

Alex Rotterdam:

really good idea and animation!

Edwin M.Santana:

love love love the humor

Kirsten Schow:

Lip sync looks great. The story is funny, and cute. I laughed. :)) The body mechanics are nice and smooth, not swimmy. I really like the guy in the hat's motions at the beginning, they have a lot of character.

Robert Firestone:

I like the way this is cut together, and the gag made me laugh. I'm not sure if the helmet guy's reaction at the end is necessary - I would have just ended around frame 300.

Annie Iglesias:

Love the concept for this one.

Megan Huggins:

Love the idea, really made the dialogue work!

Jay Jörg Smith:

nice little story you invented to that audio file with a lovely twist. All animations look fine :)

Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

nice gag and follow through