Final Rating: 5.06. Finished 40 out of 142 entries.

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Animator: Lauren Elizabeth MacColl

Description: Swans may look all cute and sweet, but are actually flying jerks.

Experience: 6 years with flash.

Time taken: About 2 weeks, due to re-starting it.

Comments:

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Niklas Bergwall:

Love the different style.

Michael Launder:

haha wow what a fun style

pankaj kushwaha:

good work keep it up :)

Steve Hawthorne:

nice animation, but I got no idea what is happening. you seem to have many narratives within this short space of time, which is hard to track how the characters belong in the scene. For example, it opens with one incident, changes to another, and then finishes with a third. Id like to see fewer characters that connect easier.0Also, I saw in your wip section, your intention that the pigeon is trying to poop on the swan but misses, but for me this muddles the idea.

usually I love your efforts, but here I am confused. sorry. looking forward to the next one.

Evan Helford:

Pretty cool man. This looks like something John K. would make. Overall not bad, and I like the use of 2D animation.

Michael O'Brien:

Bravo on originality! I saw your piece last month and still really appreciate your animation style. It's both rebellious and classic at once. I'm not sure, though...was the pigeon aiming for the swan and missed? That would make sense with the whole piece but I'm uncertain because he wasn't particularly close to either the old man or the swan and didn't look like he was about to hit either from our perspective. Keep 'e m coming, looking forward to more!

Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

you have a very nice animation style.

Gavin:

you should work for adult swim

Moby:

So many things happening